TORMENTED pics plz or GTFO

It's a beautiful sunny day.

I'm apparently sadistic today.

This is what I drew:

( WARNING: CRAPPY  )

Anyway yeah, pretty dumb...ugly...crappy sketches of mine. If my LJ friends are still alive, and still care, constructive crits isth requested. (Although I know basically everything that's wrong...everything! =D)

Hee.