A favour to ask of you...

I daydreamed this complete plot all of today, and I'm very proud of it. (It's like the time I mentioned a story about that daughter and father....which I've told Lefty once, XP)

If you could so kindly maybe read it...it's a little long but I really want to see if what I thought up is actually original, or if I didn't read enough stories or something. (Which I am obviously guilty of, lawl) Maybe it's similar with something, but I think it has at least something in it original.
And perhaps comment, nice comments will help me. I like these things. XP

( A STORY! )

Yes, that is all. Continue on with your life. XP
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R-POTE: Hakase/Yue